tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post3724239184242058026..comments2023-10-05T04:34:22.752+13:00Comments on Kerrin Hearfield: Broken Heart blogfestKerrinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06808737330801680632noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-58863640642996868852011-03-16T15:48:54.071+13:002011-03-16T15:48:54.071+13:00Nicely done. The short story displays the broken h...Nicely done. The short story displays the broken heart theme well. How some people can be so fake or change and how the lure of power can corrupt someone to do such actions. Thanks for entering my blogfest.Dawn Embershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00214560861614476799noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-38494444610375799292011-03-15T09:44:12.549+13:002011-03-15T09:44:12.549+13:00Just go to show you shouldn't change for the s...Just go to show you shouldn't change for the sake of someone else... ; )Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11046724975658216337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-38073247656652580762011-03-15T08:57:23.008+13:002011-03-15T08:57:23.008+13:00Hi,
Good to see you're letting your hair down...Hi,<br /><br />Good to see you're letting your hair down with a blogfest. Fun, ain't they?<br /><br />Nice piece you've written: punchy, angsty, and so building up for a revenge hit! ;)<br /><br />best<br />FFrancine Howarthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02326542867876257042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-89457397185967431882011-03-14T20:19:05.927+13:002011-03-14T20:19:05.927+13:00LOL I love that the princess story won't be ba...LOL I love that the princess story won't be banished!Lacey Devlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05716109142743069204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-83726216888564335142011-03-14T15:21:19.654+13:002011-03-14T15:21:19.654+13:00Short, but gets right to the heart of the MC, I fe...Short, but gets right to the heart of the MC, I feel her betrayal.Mynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07595087387069634003noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-21335463087515691192011-03-14T13:25:20.322+13:002011-03-14T13:25:20.322+13:00Gahhh, poor lady - I know how it is ;) Well, not a...Gahhh, poor lady - I know how it is ;) Well, not about the lies so much, but about the heartbreak for sure!<br /><br />Great writing!<br /><br />To answer your question on my post, her boyfriend died.Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-14524389878197690652011-03-14T12:00:33.834+13:002011-03-14T12:00:33.834+13:00nicely intense :)nicely intense :)Lynda R Young as Elle Cardyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09975442291393246148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-21243715917607468362011-03-14T11:42:25.429+13:002011-03-14T11:42:25.429+13:00This was really sad...but very intense. I feel so ...This was really sad...but very intense. I feel so bad for her, poor girl :( That guy makes me mad... he needs to suffer and see what it feels like to be heartbroken like that. Urgh, unfortunately many victims in relationships are used like that even in real life. :(<br /><br />~TRA<br /><br />http://xtheredangelx.blogspot.comWendy Luhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08048944852796207898noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-12379279039785640642011-03-14T11:20:41.066+13:002011-03-14T11:20:41.066+13:00I can really feel the tension with what's to c...I can really feel the tension with what's to come. I held my breath through the whole reading, great job!Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-62205259480932603482011-03-14T11:06:33.631+13:002011-03-14T11:06:33.631+13:00Kerrin, I love the way you've written this, th...Kerrin, I love the way you've written this, the angst, the indecision, the looming confrontation. Great entry.<br /><br />Denise<3<br /><br /><a href="http://flashquake.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Broken Hearts Blogfest Entry</a>Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-81695471123887759122011-03-14T10:54:53.204+13:002011-03-14T10:54:53.204+13:00thanks guys, the next scene is where she confronts...thanks guys, the next scene is where she confronts him. She's done wallowing :DKerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06808737330801680632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-37516840113062733202011-03-14T10:53:38.246+13:002011-03-14T10:53:38.246+13:00Poor her. *sigh*Poor her. *sigh*Nashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14984530648140460594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7189057993341683394.post-69669554340572540332011-03-14T10:21:27.569+13:002011-03-14T10:21:27.569+13:00Nice to see her debating this agony she feels. ver...Nice to see her debating this agony she feels. very well done, and a fun read.Tanya Reimerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00293977395016853814noreply@blogger.com